This was out original story board for our thriller, we decided that it was not good enough because it was not thrilling and lacked supsence and tension.
This is the first 6 shots of our original thriller, shot one shows Tiffany, the main character, looking at a photo of her and a barely visible man, this man is the enigma throughout and therefore is hard to recognise even within the photo. Shot two shows Tiffany's face at low angle tilt, this makes us feel uneasy and generally sets her mood. The third shot shows a hand pressing a button to call a lift, we know it is Tiffany from the clothes but we are cannot see her face or expressions. The fourth shot shows Tiffany within the lift, she is looking at the camera and slowly goes from happy to sad, this shows us that she is worried about something. The next two shots are tracking shots and they help to identify where tiffany is.
Well done for making an effort to catch up with your research and planning. Do note that the two girls in Heavenly Creatures are not innocent; they are lonely, obsessive, ambitious and reside in a fantasy world which culminates in a hideous murder.
ReplyDeleteTry to avoid using the word innocent unless you are referring to the outcome of a court case. Instead: vulnerable, naive, unaware, oblivious of danger and so on.........start developing your vocabulary.